Ruth Culham, author of Traits Writing
, made a fascinating point in her session at the ASCD conference that I think will really resonate with teachers and writers. Not many people would think about comparing writers to snorkelers, but after hearing Ruths example you will quickly change your mind; I know I did!
Many teachers tell their students to show, dont tell when writing, but what exactly does that mean? Ruth provided a great example for teachers to use with students to encourage them to dive deeper when writing. She says, Dont write like snorkelers; dont sit on the surface. Theres so much interesting stuff deeper in the ocean.
While snorkelers float on the surface and can only see the fish and shells from a distance, scuba divers go deeper and can make out all the details of the fish, from their scales to their iridescent colors. They can even possibly hold a shell in their hand! Even though scuba diving may be intimidating and can take more time than snorkeling, the reward is much bigger.