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Three Girls in The City by Jeanne Betancourt.

We chose this book because of my vacation to New York -- and found a really, really cool read! The story takes place in New York, you know, "The Big Apple," "The City That Never Sleeps." And it definitely made me excited to be going!!

The book is all about three girls -- Carolyn, Joy, and Maya who meet at a photography workshop. They're all really different people, and don't think they'll get along at all. Carolyn just moved to NY from Wyoming, and her dad is always worried about what she is doing and where she is. Maya is a real New York City girl, and has her own friends who don't approve of her hanging out with Joy and Carolyn. And Joy is the opposite of her name, with no self-esteem at all. And yet, they find themselves becoming friends despite all their differences!

This is totally real-life! It's all about how people become friends. . .it's not like people always like each other right away. It's great to read a book that's so true, and I think you'll definitely like Three Girls in the City as much as we do!

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CJ: Why did you choose to set Three Girls in the City in New York?

People around the world hear a lot about New York City, especially after 9/11. I thought readers would be interested in the lives of three girls from different backgrounds who meet there and become friends. Besides, writers write about what they know and I know New York City. To me the city is like a fourth character in the books. Some people think that city kids are stuck in apartments and have no "outside" life. Not true. At least for my daughter and other city kids I've known. There is SO MUCH TO DO in New York. We have a marvelous transportation system for getting around. You don't have to wait until you get your driver's license to get out and GO!

Jenni: Is anyone specific the inspiration for Joy, Maya, and Carolyn?

Maya is definitely modeled after my own daughter - Nicole - in terms of her personality and character. Carolyn is based on Martha, my daughter's BFF during grammar school. Joy is based on one of my friends. There's also a little bit of me in all of the girls. I am very psychological and aware of people's feelings like Maya. Like Carolyn I love horses, am sensitive to sarcasm, and very open to new experiences. I also had a super strict father. Here's how I'm like Joy: I felt unattractive and lacked self-confidence in my early teens - especially about my appearance and friendships. Now that I've written the second book (EXPOSED - It will come out Fall of 2003) Maya, Carolyn, and Joy have become completely their own persons. Now, when I write, I think of them as themselves.

Lesa: Are you a photographer yourself?

I took photography classes in New York City. I also taught courses in film studies and filmmaking. I even got my Master Degree in Film Studies. That was the most fun I ever had studying! I used to write scripts, too. Also a lot of fun for me.

Kate: Do you have a BFF? What is she like?

Like most women, I have a lot of female friends. Carole, my best friend from seventh grade, is still one my best friends today. We share the same memories of our teen years and still love to talk about them. Carole is shy, doesn't like to try new things, and lives a quiet life in Vermont. I live in New York, am always trying new things, and - frankly - am not shy. But even though Carole and I have different personalities and live in different cities, we are remain BFF. I always know Carole is there for me. My other FFs are mostly women who share my interests. For instance, I like to paint so some of my friends are painters. I have writer friends, too. And I absolutely love having friends of different ages. I have friends old enough to be my mother and young enough to be my daughter.

CJ: Do you have any advice to someone who wants to be a writer?

I have loads of advice. First, Outline before you write that first draft If you know what's going to happen next, you can concentrate more on character and dialogue. When you have a first draft (based on your outline) edit it. Then edit it again. The biggest mistake people make about writing is expecting it just come out perfect. I would never be a published author if I turned in what I wrote without editing it first. Another hint is to read what you've written out loud to yourself. That will help you edit some more. Here's another critical piece of advice - keep a journal. Journal writing is very valuable - not just to practice writing but to understand and document your personal history. You'll be interested in reading that journal in the future!

I must not cry.

Another stop: Ocean Parkway.

Carolyn's vision cleared and she followed the yellow line of the Q train with her finger. According to the map, she wasn't in Manhattan anymore. She was in Brooklyn. The train was slowing down.

West Eight Street and Surf Avenue. Eighth Street? But not the Eighth Street she needed. She looked out the window. A roller coaster came into view. And the biggest Ferris wheel she'd ever seen. And beyond these rides, she saw water that went on as far as she could see. And waves.

The train screeched to a stop.

The man stood and was coming toward her. He was huge. "Get off," he growled. "This is the end of the line." He stared down at her. "You lost or something?"

"No," she managed to say. "This is where I'm going."

She rushed off the train and moved quickly through the crowd down the long, noisy tunnel. What if the man followed her?

She was on the street.

To her right, there were rides and sideshows and a road leading to the water. To the left, a street of shops and food stalls.

Keep walking - fast.

She passed open-air shops spewing clingy smells of fried food and loud music and lots of people on the move.

Is he following me?

She snuck a look over her shoulder and didn't see him.

Her cell phone rang.

My father. What will I tell him?

A tear-choking lump rose up in her throat as she opened the phone.

"Hello," she croaked.

"Look, Carolyn, I'm sorry I forgot to get you this morning. I missed the stop and went back for you. You should have waited." It wasn't her father. It was Maya. "I'm sorry you missed class and everything. I suppose your father is furious at me."

"I'm lost," Carolyn whispered into the phone. "I - I don't know where I am. I don't know how to get home."

"What do you mean?" asked Maya. "What happened?"

A man with a zillion tattoos walked by arm in arm with a woman with even more. A guy with a big boom box on his shoulder, rap music blaring, pushed past her.

She couldn't hear what Maya said over the music. She saw the man from the subway coming up the block toward her. She ducked into a restaurant and looked for a sign for the rest room.

At the other end of the phone connection, Maya and Joy were in the rest room at the media center.

"What's happening?" Joy asked Maya.

"I think she's in Coney Island. All I can hear now is a lot of noise." She handed to phone to Joy.

"Hello? Hello? Carolyn, it's Joy," she said.

"There's this man," Carolyn whispered into the phone. "He was on the train. I just saw him again. I don't know what to do."

"We'll come get you."

"It'll take you a long time," Carolyn sobbed. "Besides, I don't even know where I am."

In an emergency the first rule is to stay calm, Joy reminded herself. "Maya said you could see rides and the ocean. Did you see a big roller coaster?"

"Yes," answered Carolyn. "I saw it from the train, too."

"Is the roller coaster called the Cyclone?" asked Joy.

"That's what the sign said," Carolyn said, remembering.

"I know where that is," Joy assured her.

"Wait for us at the roller coaster. We'll leave right now," Joy looked at Maya, who nodded in agreement. "Try to stay calm," Joy continued. "We're on our way. Okay?"

"Okay," said Carolyn in a small, frightened voice.

Joy closed her phone.

"Should we tell Beth?" Maya wondered out loud.

Joy shook her head. "She might tell Carolyn's father. Let's just go. So what if we cut the rest of the class? We have to get Carolyn."

The left the rest room, the building and the neighborhood and headed out to Coney Island.



 
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